Literature 8: Short Story Unit – Some Final Thoughts
Reflecting on the selections that were read in the short story unit, choose one which had the greatest impact or made the greatest impression on you. Was it because of the selection’s setting, characters, plot, theme, or point of view? Explain in detail.
When choosing a specific selection, base your decision on one or more of the five elements of a short story (noted above). Organize your response in one or more paragraphs, using examples from the specific selection to support your answer.
Comment also on any classmates’ responses, agreeing or disagreeing in a positive, constructive manner.
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Do not use your first/last name or your home e-mail address when responding. Instead, use your initials, your section (Per. 1,2,3), and the e-mail address “student@fpks.org.” Do this in the “On My Mind” section of the blog by Monday, December 15, 2008.
I believe that the story that had the most impact on me was Flowers for Algernon. I think this because of the story frame. To elaborate in details, its about a thirty-seven year old man that is mentally retarded, Charlie Gordon, that is excepted to go under a brain surgery to increase his brightness. While the story continues, Charlie grew smarter, and smarter. Eventually he was to smart for anyone to even understand him. He witnessed a friend die, and he was having thoughts that he was going to end up the same way. Also, this has the biggest impact because its incredible how smart he really was, and when the smartness was dying out, he went back to normal. What I mean is that there is always something special about everyone, and no one can ever change that about you.
December 11, 2008 @ 5:12 pmI would say that the story that truly touched my heart and had the largest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. In this story, the character Charlie really touched my heart. It was cruel and unfair the way he was treated, and this story shows you that mentally disabled people are just like you. Mentally challenged people have feelings just like us, and feel the same pain as we do. Charlie encountered many obstacles as a retarded person; he could not understand people, and was often mistreated. These are almost unbearable to encounter, and Charlie even lived his life with a smile, no matter what he went through. Also, once intelligent he faced more troubles. He was unable to communicate with people because he was too intelligent, which caused him stress, anguish, and sadness. Charlie encountered many things that I would never been able to cope with. He faced mental disabilities, superior intelligence, and then back to mentally troubled. These cycles were very hard to adjust to, and caused Charlie much mental suffering. Overall, for many reasons I believe “Flowers for Algernon” was one of the stories that had the largest impression on me.
December 11, 2008 @ 5:28 pmThis short story was interesting to read about all of the short stories. The one short story that had a great impact on me the most was “Flowers for Algernon”. This had a great impact on me the most because of the point of view. The point of view impacted me because a man named Charlie Gordon, who was retarded, but he was tested in an experiment and this experiment helped him to become smart. Also I think, that the theme of this story had a big impact on me to. The theme was being intelligent doesn’t mean being happy. In fact it’s better off being who you really are.
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December 11, 2008 @ 6:14 pmThe story that had the most impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. This was a very original, powerful story about a mentally retarded man named Charlie Gordon who agrees to have an experimental operation performed on him to make him smarter. Although the theme, plot, setting, and characters were all important to the story, I thought the point of view of Charlie Gordon was the most interesting. One example of his point of view about himself is when he had to take the inkblot tests and other tests that the doctors gave him. Also the progress reports he writes before he had the operation are interesting and show his point of view. Before the operation you can tell that somewhere in the back of his mind he realizes he is not quite right. He knows he has trouble learning and remembering even the simplest things. The progress reports are very interesting because of the spelling and grammar errors and the simple things he writes about, and it was interesting to see how those progress reports changed after the surgery. You can see Charlie’s mind slowly changing as he is moving toward becoming a genius. Another interesting thing from Charlie’s point of view is how he realizes that the people he thought were his friends were really making fun of him and not so nice at all. It was interesting that he had trouble communicating with people when he was fully retarded and then had trouble because he was so much smarter than everyone else. An example of this is how his relationship with Miss Kinnian changes. Another example from Charlie’s point of view is when Algernon died and Charlie realizes that he is going to start going back to the way he was before. He documents all of this in his progress reports.
I agree with DG’s comments about how the cycles that Charlie had to go through were very hard to adjust too and caused him more suffering. It was really sad to see what Charlie had to go through and what other retarded people go through and that is why the story had a great impact on me.
December 11, 2008 @ 9:41 pmThe short story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. This story made me think about how other people in life live and the troubles they go through everyday. This story effected me the most because of the characters and the theme. Charlie, the main character, was a mentally disabled man who undergoes an experiment to make him smarter. In the end, this experiment only makes Charlie depressed and he goes back to being mentally disabled again. This was very tough for Charlie because he went from being mentally disabled, to being too smart for anyone to comprehend, to going back to being mentally disabled again. This was very hard for Charlie because he realized many things as he was becoming smart. He realized that his “friends” weren’t really his friends. He also realized that he loves Miss Kinnian. However, he thinks that she would never really love him. As you can imagine, this was very tough for Charlie. Even though he was mentally disabled he still was a kind, sweet man who was treated poorly by some of his “friends”. I agree with DG’s response about how Charlie was treated. When I was reading this book and read that Joe Carp and Frank Reilly were playing mean jokes on Charlie just to get a laugh, I felt sad for Charlie. I do not think that Charlie deserved that kind of behavior from people, because he didn’t do anything to them. Also, I think that Joe and Frank should have realized that Charlie is no t that different from them; he still has feelings. Although the main character had a large impact on me the theme did as well. The theme of this story is, to cherish every moment in life while you have it, before its gone. I think that this is a great theme for this story because before Charlie undergoes the operation he is a sweet, happy man. However, after the experiment/operation he is not the same and becomes depressed. That is why Charlie should have cherished those times before he became depressed because before that he was having fun with his life. Another example would be when Algernon died, Charlie was very upset that he passed away. Charlie should have cherished those moments when he was with Algernon, because Algernon was Charlie’s best friend. As you can see, “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me, as I think it did for many other people.
December 11, 2008 @ 10:50 pmThe story that had the most impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon.” This story is about a thirty-seven year old, mentally retarted man that is undergoing and unpredictable surgery that will hopefully make him smarter. After the surgery, he does become smarter, but not for very long. He outsmarts everybody, but then reverts back to his normal ways. This story has the most impact on me because it reminds me to be myself. This is because when Charlie is smarted, he isn’t the same person that he used to be and people view him differently. It reminded me that being myself is better than trying to be something I’m not.
I definitely agree with LC. There is absolutely something special about everyone, and no one can change that. This is definitely something else that impacted me from the story, “Flowers for Algernon.”
December 12, 2008 @ 1:54 pmOut of all of the stories we read in the short story unit, the one that had the biggest influence on me was without a doubt “Flowers for Algernon”. The amount of mental pain and suffering that Charlie must have gone trough is so immense that it really makes you begin to count your blessings. Whenever you are laughed at a teased by your friends you fell terrible, but to know that all the times you have known them and thought they really cared for you they really didn’t must be one experience that puts you through great anguish. Charlie felt alone and unwanted, like a piece of dirt on the sidewalk of life. On top of his sudden realization of truth, he was forced to cope with the improvement and then recession of his intelligence. At first all seemed alright when he began to learn how to read and write correctly and boosted his knowledge, but soon he was no longer able to communicate with the people he cared for most around him and was basically isolated and alone. To make matters worse, he his mind began to slow again and he returned to his normal state. The author insinuates that he is eventually to die, just like Algernon did.
December 12, 2008 @ 4:52 pmAll Charlie really wants is to be liked for who is and had loving, caring friends who would never put him in harms way. However, he is taken advantage of because of his mental disability. Fortunately, when his “friends” learn about what he went through they actually begin to support him in such a way that Charlie has never seen. The tell him that they will be there for him from now on and always help him along if he needs it. This teaches the reader some important themes. “All humans, no matter how different they may be, should be treated with respect,” and, “Intelligence and other traits do not matter as much as you may think because in the end what you think of yourself really matters. As long as you believe in yourself you can lead a fine life.” are themes that are very prevalent in the short story. These also relate directly to our life and can be used to live better.
I completely agree with both DG and MS on the fact that Charlie is truly not that different than everyone else working at the factory; all he wants is to work hard and make friends that care for him, and yet his “friends” at the beginning don’t realize that they should indeed respect him.
Out of all of the stories from the short story unit, I would definitely have to say that the story, “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impression on me. This story really made me think and realize that all people have feelings, no matter if they have disabilities or not. It also made me realize that people, even if they can’t do some of the things most people can, are still nice, kind humans. Even Charlie realized in the story that people do make fun of “retarded” people when they mess up. For example, while Charlie was eating his dinner at a nearby diner, the new, young dishwasher broke some dishes. Charlie then began to laugh and mock the boy because it is easy to get caught up in things like that, but then he realizes what he was doing and thought otherwise. He realized that this kid had feelings, too and shouldn’t be made fun of.
This story made the greatest impression on me, because Charlie told the story from his point of view and you could really tell what was going through his mind, and you could really feel for him and his emotions. Also, the theme left a large impression on me because the message was clear and to the point. As soon as I finished reading this short story, I quickly realized what the central theme/ message of this story was. The theme of this story, I believe, is to treat everyone with respect because all humans have feelings. This story really taught me a lesson and by far, it was my favorite story of this unit!
December 13, 2008 @ 10:28 amI think the story that touched me and had the greatest impact on me would be “Flowers for Algernon”. “Flowers for Algernon” is a story about a mentally restarted man, named Charlie. He was treated in a mean way. His supposed friends made fun of him and laughed at him. While they were doing these pranks on him he didn’t know that they were laughing at him not with him. This story had the greatest impact on me because he is a mentally retarded man that gets laughed at just because of the way he is. Every single day he would go through being laughed at. He went through that every single day, but he managed to keep happiness in him. Then he had his surgery and got really smart. Charlie thought this was so great, but then he started to find out that he could not communicate with anyone. That was another problem that led him into sadness. Then he got mentally retarded again; that was another problem to face. I don’t think that I could face anything like that. That’s why I think that “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me.
December 13, 2008 @ 5:10 pmOut of all of the stories from the short story unit, I would have to say that the story, “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me. “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me because it showed me that everyone has feelings and to not change myself for someone else. Charlie was treated really poorly which wasn’t right at all.I agree with MS when she said being yourself is better than trying to be something your not.
December 13, 2008 @ 9:16 pmThe short story that impacted me the most was “Flowers for Algernon”. This story is about a thirty-seven year old man who’s name is Charlie. Charlie is mentally retarded. When the story begins his IQ level is 68. Many people at this intelligence level are vicious, but this is quite the opposite with Charlie. He is the nicest man. He is kind and considerate even when others are not. He endured tortuous pranks that he did not understand. He thought he would never be smart enough to be a normal person. The part in the story that impacted me the most was the sick, disgusting, and immature pranks by Charlie’s two “friends”. These so called friends make fun of Charlie and do not care about him at all. This brings up so many emotions in me. I feel hatred toward Frank and Joe, Charlie’s “friends”, because of the mean things they did to him. I also feel sadness for Charlie who suffered from their cruelty. Lastly, I feel happiness for Charlie because he was able to receive surgery to triple his intelligence level. I agree with CF because of her reasons on FFA. This story has changed the way I looked at disabled people even more than it I already do. This story has, arguably, the most powerful message ever displayed in literature.
December 14, 2008 @ 10:44 amThe story that had the greatest impact on me was “The Kitten”. In this story, a young boy is taught the meaning of life after he kills a kitten. The main character in this story is young boy who feels almost neglected by his father. His father works a nightshift, and sleeps all day, only speaking to his sons when they need to be reprimanded. His father is awoken by a kitten, and tells the boys to kill the kitten meaning for them just to quiet it. The boy, very angry and resentful of his father, decides to take his father literally, so he can not punish him. He then hangs the kitten. I was very surprised that a six-year old could even form the idea of ending a life. My seven-year old cousins can’t even kill a spider on the wall, let alone a kitten. An impression was really made on me when I read this. The theme of this story, respect life, was very evident, and it has really taught me to respect all living things.
December 14, 2008 @ 10:46 amThe short story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me because it made me think how people that are mentally slow must feel everyday. People think, since they are “different”, they wont understand what your saying about them. They have feelings to, there just like everyone else, but they learn in a different way. What affected me was the characters and theme. Charlie was the main character. He was a thirty-seven, mentally retarded man who undergoes an experiment just to make him smarter, so he can be just like everyone else. After the experiment, he is just more upset and he goes back to being mentally disabled once again. This was hard for Charlie to know he went from mentally disabled, to being way too smart for anyone to comprehend him, to going back to being disabled. When he was smart, he realized many different things. He noticed that his “buddies” really weren’t his buddies. They just wanted a laugh and once he was smart they wanted nothing to do with him anymore. Also, he experienced something very good. He realized that he loves Miss Kinnian. However, he feels she will never be able to love him. This was very touch for Charlie. In the beginning of the story, with an IQ of 68, Charlie was surprisingly very kind and gentle. Which is not normal because people with that low of an IQ are normally hostile. At the end, after loosing his intelligence, he became very hostile and angry. I agree with MS and DG about how Charlie had been treated. The way Joe Carp and Frank Reilly were treating him you would have never known they were “buddies”. They used to laugh and play jokes on Charlie, so I felt really bad for him. They just wanted Charlie around for a laugh. I don’t think Charlie deserved that because all he really wanted was a friend. The theme affected me also because no matter how smart someone is, or how “stupid” someone is, they should be treated like a regular human being. Everyone should get the same chance in life, and not worry about being made fun of just because they are slower than someone else. Imagine if you were in Charlie’s position, I know people wouldn’t life that.
December 14, 2008 @ 11:14 amThe story that had an impact on me the most was “Flowers for Algernon.” It is about a mentally retarded man, who has an I.Q. of 68. The story shows you how people make fun of other people because of their mental disability. It also shows examples of how the victims of these cruel pranks react and feel about them. After Charlie had the operation, his I.Q was rising gradually. He then started to have diferent views of his “friends”, Joe and Frank. Another reaason this story had a great impact on me is that Joe Carp and Frank Reilly began to look out for Charlie towards the end I agree with SC because of his thoughts on way Joe and Frank treated Charlie. Hopefully, this story will have a strong impact on anyone else who reads it.
December 14, 2008 @ 1:09 pmOf all the short stories that we had viewed in class, “Flowers for Algernon” was the story that had made the greatest impression on me. I chose this story because it had a meaningful theme or central message. Charlie Gordon may have been mentally disabled, but that never stopped him from being the nice, caring, and genial man that he is. Charlie never had to undergo the surgery to be who he really was. It was sad for him to realize that his friends were never really kind to him at all. It also ashamed Charlie to discover that he never realized that his friends were just making fun of him when his was mentally disabled. Another central message or theme for this story is that people who are mentally disabled have feelings and are just like everyone else. Despite the fact that Charlie was disabled mentally, he still had feelings and expressed sorrow when he was being mocked by his co-workers.
The plot, too, had also made a great impression on me. In the story, we were able to view the journey of a mentally disabled man gradually grow into a person who is extremely intelligent, back into a mentally disabled man again. Being able to see the story through Charlie’s own eyes and perceive and experience what he is feeling emotionally throughout his journey, made the story very powerful in meaning. In each passing progress report you see how everything Charlie perceives changes. His knowledge began to expand and he was able to understand everything in a new and different way. Although, with his growing knowledge, Charlie finds it even more difficult to become like everyone else due to his disability to communicate with those who are not as intelligent as he was.
December 14, 2008 @ 2:52 pmThe story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. This story was a strong, compelling story of a mentally challenged man’s struggle to fit in with society. This story impacted me so greatly for many reasons. First of all, the author, Daniel Keyes, wrote the story in such a way that you could see through the eyes of Charlie Gordon. The author made the story in the style of a journal and you can clearly see the transition that Charlie goes through. The author purposely misspells words and punctuates incorrectly to show what its like to be a mentally retarded person. Another thing that had an impact on me is that after the surgery, Charlie begins to realize things that fill him with sorrow. Charlie sees that his so called “friends” only keep him around to get a good laugh. Also, Charlie realizes that he loves Miss Kinnian, but he finds it hard to communicate with her. I think that the author expresses Charlie’s anguish really well. Lastly, the thing that hit me the most was the main character Charlie. Whatever Charlie did, he did happily and enthusiastically. He was well aware that he was different from others, so he tried extremely hard to learn more and to fit in. Charlie also remained optimistic throughout the story, and never gave up hope that he would get smarter. Charlie was so kind hearted, and cooperative that even when pranks were played on him he still laughed. I felt really bad that his co-workers took advantage of his kind-heart and mental disability. All in all, “Flowers for Algernon” is a deep, inspirational book that shows you that mentally challenged people have emotions just like us.
December 14, 2008 @ 4:36 pmI would say the story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. This story really made a huge impact on me because Charlie didn’t have the intelligents as other people. Charlie still had feelings like other people, but the two men at his work did really mean jokes on him and he didn’t know. He cared about everyone and he never said anything mean about anyone, he was just slow then other people. When he finally got his intelligents he finds out that his ‘friend’ weren’t his friends and kept on playing jokes on him and also when he got smarter he wasn’t able to talk to anyone. It made him sad and made him wish he never got his intelligents. He was much happier when he didn’t have his intelligents. After Algernon died he started to lose his intelligents. He knew that his intelligents would disappear and he knew he would forget about them. This story really touched my heart and made me realize that slow people have feelings and it isn’t fair for them to be treated in a mean way. The charater, Charlie really made this story have a huge impact on me. Charlie is slow, and there are many people that are slow too and that made the huge impact because people really do get treated like Charlie did and that is unfair for people to get treated like that. I agree with DG, this story really did touch my heart and showed that people souldn’t be treated differently just because they aren’t as intelligent. Overall this story had the most impact on me.
December 14, 2008 @ 4:44 pmFrom the many short stories we have read in this literature unit, the one story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. There are many lessons that can be learned from Charlie’s exemplary actions. He was a man who would do anything to surmount his tribulations as a mentally handicapped person. This goes to show that if we are determined and put our mind to something it can be done. Charlie was willing to go through the physical and mental agony of the surgery. In addition, he was always eager to learn new things. He did not limit any knowledge that could be absorbed in his mind and set no boundaries to his education. Every one of Charlie’s experiences was thought of as an opportunity to learn something new. For example, Charlie rides the tour bus every Sunday with the hope to gain knowledge. After the surgery was completed, Charlie began to observe that people responded differently to him. He realized that he was much happier just being himself. Intelligence made him even more unlike everyone else. Charlie possessed a gift that all should be envious of. He had the ability to forgive people no matter what they did wrong. He knew after the surgery that Joe and Frank were making fun of him, but he was able to forgive them for their actions and be friends with them again. All Charlie had ever wanted was a true friend. He longed for someone who accepted him for the person he was. I believe that we should look upon people with mental or physical obstacles as people just like you or me. This story teaches a lesson about basic respect for people. No matter how different someone is we should treat them with the same respect as anyone else. It is apparent that Charlie understands this lesson when he stands up for the boy at the restaurant. I was very enlightened after reading this story about treating others. It made me think about how I regard others in my own life. I feel that the lessons learned in “Flowers for Algernon” are ones that we can all apply to our own lives in some way. This will enable us all to change the means in which we look upon other people.
December 14, 2008 @ 4:50 pmI agree with MS that Charlie is no different from anyone else. It makes you think why he is treated so much differently than everyone else. I think ignorance is one of the main reasons why people treat Charlie as they do. They do not understand that he ,as all people, has emotions. In addition, when people do not feel good about themselves, they take it out on other people.
Out of all the short stories read in this unit, I believe that “Raymond’s Run” really taught me a valuable lesson about respect. “Raymond’s Run” is a story about a sassy young girl named Squeaky and her mentally-retarded brother Raymond. Squeaky is largely responsible for Raymond and he accompanies her on her runs, for she is the star runner in their town. However, many of the other girls in town make fun of Raymond because he’s retarded. In this passage, I believe that the characters display the greatest impact. Squeaky really showed how to stick up for someone you love and to never give up. At the end of the story, knowing that she has already shown everyone that she has a place, she decides to train Raymond to become a runner. This action portrays Squeaky’s real character as a person and it shows how she is loving and respectful despite her sassy attitude.
December 14, 2008 @ 5:07 pmRelating to many of the other posts, I believe that “Flowers for Algernon” depicts a great message as well. However, in my opinion, “Raymond’s Run” is a great lesson that people should take into consider due to how Squeaky shows love to her family members and how she sacrifices her whole running career for Raymond.
Out of all the short stories that we have read, I think that “Flowers For Algernon” is the short story that had the greatest impact on me. The story, “Flowers For Algernon” is about a mentally retarded man who was treated very cruelly and didn’t know about it. You can tell that in the beginning of the story that he wasn’t very literate. But, after the surgery, he gradually became very literate after each progress report. As we read on, we all found out that the intelligence didn’t last long, and it gradually decreased. As a result of the surgery he found out that Algernon, the mouse that he raced to test his intelligence, died of brain failure. This made him think that this outcome of Algernon can happen to him. After all of this, his so-called “friends”, finally stick up for him for what he has been through, and accept him as a real person with feelings. We all found out that a regular person is the same thing as a mentally retarded person; we are all human beings and have feelings. We just can’t call people retarded just because they don’t have the brain capacity that we have. All of us living on Earth are the same thing, a person.
December 14, 2008 @ 5:32 pmOut of all of the short stories we have read in class, I think “The Kitten” had the biggest impact on me. “The Kitten” is a story about how a young boy kills a kitten to show the resentment he has towards his father. His father is never nice to his sons and sleeps all day because he works a nightshift. “The Kitten” is probably one of the shortest stories out one the ones we have read, but it had a huge impact on me. What impacted on me the most, was the story’s theme and plot. After the boy killed the kitten to show his resentment towards his dad, it made me very emotional and upset. Also when the boy’s mom made him pick up the kitten and bury it; that also made me very emotional. This explains the theme of the book, which is that every animal and human deserves to live and should not be killed for any reason. This theme really impacts on me because it shows that the boy never should have killed the kitten to show resentment towards his father. Also the theme shows that the boy’s mother did the right thing, to make the boy pick up the kitten, bury it and then say a prayer to God. The boy deserved to go through the anguish of picking up the kitten and burying it himself. The second reason that this story made a huge impact on me is because of the plot. The plot was that there was a kitten outside and the boy’s father wanted him to keep it quiet, so he could sleep and said to kill it. The boy always disliked his father and, so he took his father literally and actually killed the kitten by hanging it in a noose. This, like I said before, made me very emotional and made a huge impact on me because hanging a kitten to just show resentment is a horrible and shocking thing to do, not just for a six year old boy, but for anyone. The last reason this story impacted on me was because of the point of view. The point of view of “The Kitten” is in first person. The narrator and author is Richard Wright. Richard Wright is the boy in the story and “The Kitten” is a true story. This impacts on me a lot because somebody is not making this whole story up, it really happened and knowing this makes me much more emotional and very upset. Overall “The Kitten” impacted on me the greatest out of all of the short stories that we have read so far and it taught me to never hurt or kill a living human or animal.
I agree with EM bacause “The Kitten” has taught me to respect all living things. I also agree that the theme of this short story is to always respect life and living things because every living thinh deserves to live.The boy should have never took his father literally and actually killed the kitten just to show his hatred towards his father because that kitten and everyother living thing should deserve to live.
December 14, 2008 @ 5:34 pmOut of all the short stories we have read in class, I think, “Flower’s for Algernon” had the best impact on me. The reason why I fell this way is because the characters are really what made the story. Charlie Gordon, was thirty-seven years old, and was mentally retarded who wanted to be as intelligent as everyone else was. So, Miss Kinnian, Charlie’s adult night school teacher recommends him for the surgery. Before the surgery what Charlie valued most was his friends, Joe Carp and Frank Reilly who work with Charlie at the factory. But when Charlie under goes the brain surgery he realizes that Joe and Frank were only his friends to make fun of him. Charlie was very sad when he found this out; so the person he turned to was Miss Kinnian. When, eventually, Charlie starts to grow feelings for her. Before Charlie under goes the surgery he had to take many tests. He had to define inkblots, write in his journal, and race Algernon, a mouse, through a maze. After the surgery, the way you could tell Charlie got smarter was because he beat Algernon at the maze. Charlie’s writing in his journal entries improved. At the end of the story, Charlie, realizes that the two doctors who performed the surgery, Dr. Nemur and Dr. Strauss weren’t as intelligent as he thought. He had grown not to want to talk to Miss Kinnian anymore because he couldn’t communicate with anyone anymore. Charlie then decides to research the experiment that was made on him and Algernon. The results came out to be that Algernon was smart, lost his intelligence, and then died. We are led to believe that Charlie will die in a matter of time. So when Charlie finds out the results he moves to New York. I think, that Charlie was a great character to learn about because he went through a lot of changes. Another thing that I have learned from “Flower’s for Algernon” was to treat others the way you would want to be treated even if there handicap. Which was a theme I noticed because many of us treat handicap people meanly.
December 14, 2008 @ 7:02 pmI agree with KT with how determined Charlie is in life. Also, how Charlie observed everyone else. He thought that they weren’t as smart as him. Another thing I agree with KT with is how Charlie just wanted friends, and for people to accept him for who he is, not how smart he is.
From all of the stories we read in class, I believe the story,” Flowers for Algernon”, made the biggest impact for me. This story was about a grown mentally disabled man who goes throughout his life being teased without him knowing it. The main character, Charlie, was a bright student and he would do anything to be smarter. Throughout the story, Charlie would undergo a surgery that will temporally make him smarter than anyone else. Charlie had no idea what he was about to face. With Charlie’s operation finished he notices that he gets smarter everyday. The flaw to this operation is that he finds out that his friends such as, Miss Kinnian and Charlie’s friends, were not really his friends at all. They were using him for their own amusement or just to help themselves. A little while after Charlie finding out all this, his friends start to stick up for him because they realize he has feelings too. This story made me realize something too.
Everyone should be treated equally because they are just like us. They have feelings and hearts just like people that aren’t disabled. I believed this story touched more people than myself. We should treat people the way we want to be treated. We are all the same.
December 14, 2008 @ 7:22 pmOut of all the short stories we read in this unit, the one that had the greatest impact or impression on me would have to be the story “Flowers for Algernon”. This story was about a thirty-six year old mentally retarded man (Charlie Gordan) with a sixty-eight I.Q. In the story all Charlie wanted was to be smart like everyone else. So on his own Charlie sign up for a night school, and while he was there his teacher (Ms. Kinnian) recommended him for a surgerythat would be able to make him have an I.Q. of two hundred plus. Charlie went through with this surgery, but his intelligence only lasted him a while. When Charlie was at the peak of his intelligence he began to realize a lot of things. For example, the people who he thought were his friend just kept him around for a good laugh and the doctors who gave in the surgery were just in it for the glory. By the end of this story it had such a big impact me on me and the way I view other people. The story taught me that everyone deserves to be treated with the same respect, because no matter what kind of person they are they are still a human being.
December 14, 2008 @ 7:28 pmAfter reading several of other responds I have to agree with EM about the short story “The Kitten”. It was just very surprising how a young boy was able to kill the kitten. Also the fact that he had so much resentment for his father at such a young age really surprised me.
All the short stories I have read with my classmates were really good and made me really think about each one. But the short story that really impacted on me the most was The Kitten. The Kitten was about a boy who’s dad never paid attention to him. When his dad said kill the kitten he didn’t mean it literally. The boy killed the kitten and even though he knew his dad didn’t really mean to murder the kitten. The Kitten taught me three important lessons. The first lesson was all creatures have feelings. You shouldn’t kill creatures or anything because they have thoughts, feelings and a lot of things that humans have. An example of this is when the boy killed the kitten. He didn’t think the kitten had feelings so he kills him. The second lesson I have learned from this short story was that you don’t have to kill anything to get attention. Your family all loves you even if they don’t show it as much as you’d like. The third lesson I learned was don’t take everything literally. From the short story the boy took his dad literally by killing the kitten. Even though the boy knew his dad did not want him to kill anything.
December 14, 2008 @ 8:10 pmAll of these things impacted on me and made me think about the lessons of the short stories. The theme had the most impact on me. The theme of the short story was all creatures have feelings. You shouldn’t kill creatures or anything because they have thoughts, feelings and a lot of things the humans have.
Out of all of the short stories we have read in class, I think “The Kitten” had the biggest impact on me. This story shocked me because it was something that happened in real life. I young boy strangled and killed a kitten just to show his father how much resentment he had towards him.. His father told him to kill it, but he did not mean what he said. This boy new that his father did not mean it, but he killed the kitten anyway. This showed me how sad the world can get. A young boy who has been neglected by his father, who lives in a tenement, and can not play in his own home stooped to a low level and killed a living creature. What if that kitten was a person, what if this is happening all over the world and know one knows it, and what would happen if more and more kids were neglected? I am scared that the more kids who want to get back at their parents will do things even more drastic. Like hurting them selves or their parents. They are put in terrible situations and sometimes act out to be noticed. I hope that someday that fewer kids are being neglected and more kids are being taken care of.
Another reason why this story had the greatest impact on me was when the boys mother made him pick the kitten up and bury. I believe that what she did was the right thing. She made her son clean up after himself. She made him realize what he did was wrong. She taught her son that even though the kitten was not a person does not make it okay to kill it. Then the little boy got on his knees and prayed to god. After this happened the boy knew his mother loved him, but he knew she was very disappointed in him. What happened in that story was very moving and heartrending. This story will stay with me for the rest of my life.
December 14, 2008 @ 8:17 pmOut of the entire lesson learning short stories that we have read in this unit, “The Kitten” by Richard Wright had the biggest impact on me. “The Kitten” was about a young boy who takes the life of a young kitten to retaliate and get back at his father for being a grouch and not being a father who is there for him. What had the biggest impact on me was the stories climax of when the boy killed the kitten. This part of this story taught more than any other story we read. I learned two things at this part of the story. The first thing I learned was that once a person or animal is gone it’s gone; no matter how upset you become or no matter how much you pray for the animal, it’s a part of life that you have to deal with. The second thing I learned is that you have to listen to elders no matter how much you disagree with or dislike that person. You can also infer that life is short and that anything could happen to anyone for any reason at anytime even if it is not meant to happen in the end. In this case Richard really didn’t like his father so he did whatever he could to get back at him. The reason this story had the biggest impact on me was because it was a true story unlike all the others which were fiction stories. Also it was a little scary that a six-year-old boy did this. When you read this story you become afraid of killing any animal or person under any circumstance.
I agree with EM and AC respect all living things. I also agree that the theme of this short story is to always respect life and living things because every living thing deserves to live no matter any of its personalities or brains like in “Flowers for Algernon”. The boy should have never taken his father literally and should not have actually killed the kitten. If I ever did that I would be tormented for the rest of my life with the thoughts of killing an animal.
December 14, 2008 @ 8:59 pmOut of all the short stories we have read throughout this unit, the one that made the greatest impression on me was “The Kitten” by Richard Wright. After reading this story, I found it nearly impossible to understand how a boy, being only six years old, could take it upon himself to come up with a plan to take his father’s words literally and actually kill a small, defenseless, innocent kitten, when he only meant for him to make the kitten quiet. It horrified me knowing that Richard would be willing to end the life a living creature only to show his father his resentment and hatred towards him. In addition, the fact that this was an autobiography, meaning that this experience actually happened to him, also worried me, too. How could a little boy take the life of something as innocent as a kitten? When Richard’s mother forced him to bury the kitten as a punishment, the setting scared me because they were out in the cold, lonely night. I can’t even begin to imagine the fear and teror that the boy felt at that moment.
December 14, 2008 @ 9:27 pmSomething else that really had a huge impact on me from this story was the theme. The theme was that you should respect and care for all living things, no matter how small, and that once you end someone or something else’s life, it can never come back. Life is something that everyone around the world should be grateful for, because you only get a chance to live once. “The Kitten” was a very powerful and meaningful story with a strong theme, so I am very glad that our class had the opportunity to read it. I think that this short story made me think more than any other one in this unit did, mainly because of the message and the incredible lesson that was taught through it.
I strongly agree with AC because this person said that every human and animal deserves a chance to live, and should not be killed for any reason. She also stated that the story made her feel very emotional and upset, and the story had that same impression on me. I think that everyone who has read “The Kitten” has definitely learned something very important from it, that is, to show respect for all different forms of life, because life is a precious gift, and surely not something that should be taken away from someone, or taken for granted.
The story that had made the biggest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. This story had a big impact on me because all Charlie Gordon, the main character, wanted was to be as smart as everyone else. Charlie Gordon was a mentally retarded thirty-seven year old man. He went tonight school trying to become smarter. His night school teacher, Miss.Kinnian recommended him for a surgery to increase his intelligence. Charlie has the surgery and his intelligence eventually becomes over two hundred, before the surgery his intelligence was sixty-eight. Charlie begins to realize his friends really weren’t his friends, and were making fun of him. Charlie also becomes so smart that he cannot even communicate with other people, this frustrates him and makes him wish he did not have the surgery. After that Charlie then starts to loose his intelligence as soon as he got it. This upset Charlie because he knew he was loosing his super intelligence, and that was all he wanted. All together this story had a big impact on me.
December 14, 2008 @ 9:29 pmThe short story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. I think “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me because of the many themes it had in it. The theme that jumped out at me the most was respect others the same as you would want to be treated because every living thing has feelings no matter their race, nationality, beliefs, ,or even their I.Q. levels. In the story, ”Flowers for Algernon”, there is a man named Charlie who is a genial, kind, innocent mentally retarded person that gets made fun of just because of his intelligence level. For example, his “friends”, Joe Carp and Frank Reilly, would always pull really crude pranks on Charlie. When Charlie reaches an I.Q. level of 200+, Joe Carp and Frank Reilly don’t want to be around him anymore since they only wanted him around if he was going to be the butt of their jokes. Charlie realizes that they were never really his friends and never cared about him or his feelings. At the end, when Charlie loses his intelligence, Joe Carp and Frank Reilly understand that even though Charlie is retarded he still has feelings just as they do, so they stick up for him and respect him as if he has the same intelligence level as they do. I think anyone who reads this short story or watches the movie would get the same idea for the theme and it would teach everyone the lesson of respecting others no matter the difference between you because everyone has feelings.
December 14, 2008 @ 9:44 pmReflecting on the selections that were read in the short story unit, the one that had the greatest impact on me was definitely “Flowers for Algernon”. This is the story of a mentally retarded man who seeks to be smarter. The beginning of the story was very sad. Charlie’s co-workers, Frank and Joe, made fun of him and teased him all the time just because he was different than them. He didn’t have the knowledge that they had therefore they thought it was funny to tease him without him even realizing it. Charlie thought that these people were his friends, but soon enough he figured out the unacceptable things that they were doing to him were just to make him feel embarrassed. They only hung around him to make him look stupid. This part of the story truly made you think about how he must have felt. Just because he is not as smart doesn’t mean he has no feelings. That part of the story seriously teaches you how hard it is for people like Charlie and it also teaches you never to be like his Frank and Joe. No matter how aloof you think a person is from the world, that doesn’t mean they don’t know that what you are doing isn’t right and that they’re not being treated respectfully. Also in the story, there were two surgeons who performed a surgery on Charlie’s brain to raise his IQ from sixty-eight, which is extremely low, to almost triple that. He became extremely intelligent and it was hard to see the way it affected him. Charlie became so smart that he couldn’t communicate with anyone because they didn’t understand him. The way he talked was completely out of everyone’s league. He became hostile because he couldn’t talk to anyone. When his teacher and the love of his life came to see him he sent her away crying. He felt disconnected from the world because of the surgery and he wanted to be like everyone else. Soon enough, the surgery wore off and Charlie became his old self again. The interesting part of this situation was that when he went back to work all of his co-workers treated him with respect. It was great to see them trying to make Charlie happy and try to make up for all of the cruel things they had done in the past. I think that was the highlight of the story. Even tough Charlie felt like they were only being nice to him because they felt sorry for him, so he decided to move away, they tried. We should all try to be like Frank and Joe in the end of the story because I’m sure Charlie was able to forgive them and love them as the friends he always thought they were.
December 14, 2008 @ 9:47 pmI agree with what DG Period 1 said. She said that the story touched her heart and went on to all of the obstacles that Charlie went through. The story touched my heart as well. All of the emotions and different situations that occurred in the story made it come alive and made you feel pity for Charlie. It also taught you that mentally challenged people are just like you and me. I’d be happy to read this story again because I enjoyed it very much.
In our short story unit, I feel the short story that had the most impact on me and which really touched me was “Flowers for Algernon.” Charlie was a mentally retarded man who was looked upon as someone who could be used for jokes. All of his co-workers, especially Joe and Frank who he thought were his friends, used him for laughs and Charlie couldn’t realize it with his mental disability. He believed they were all laughing together, not at him. Charlie went through many mental suffering having been through a surgery that made him a genius; however, soon later returning to his normal mentally retarded disability. However, the reason for this story really touching me was through the relationship between Charlie and Ms. Kinnian. The way Ms. Kinnian always supported and believed in Charlie was like a relationship I was up close and personal with. In my younger childhood, a woman named Rosie babysat me. My sister, my parents, and I thought she was an outstanding babysitter. One day, Rosie asked my parents if she could have her sister J.J. babysit with her everyday. J.J. happened to be mentally challenged and this caused a issue to stir up. My parents weren’t sure if it was good to expose their children to a mentally challenged adult. With much deliberation, my parents decided to allow Rosie to bring J.J. I am extremely thankful that my parents allowed her to babysit my sister and me. I feel I learned so much about her and mentally retarded people that I do not see them as someone I can make fun of. I feel that she learned so much form my sister and me as well. She taught me that everyone no matter who you or if you have a disability they should be treated with respect. The relationship I saw between Rosie and J.J. was very similar to Charlie and Ms. Kinnian. Rosie was always there for J.J. and cared so deeply for her.
I agree with MR’s post that all people should treat others the way they want to be treated. Charlie just wanted to have friends; he thought that Joe and Frank were his friends when they really weren’t. I’m sure that Joe and Frank wouldn’t have liked it if Charlie used his intelligence to make fun of them when he was a genius.
December 14, 2008 @ 10:34 pmOut of the six short stories we read in this unit, “Flowers for Algernon” proved to be the most powerful. “Flowers for Algernon” was truly an inspirational tale about a man named Charlie Gordon who fought mental retardation and was determined to become intelligent. I feel that “Flowers for Algernon” was the most riveting of the tales because of Charlie Gordon, the main character. Charlie was not the typical main character to a story; he had much more depth than any other character that I have ever read about. What’s interesting about Charlie is that he’s one of the characters that you can’t really relate to. Reading about this man’s struggles made me see the world through different eyes. After reading “Flowers for Algernon” I honestly felt guilty about ever calling anyone names like “retard” or “idiot” or anything of the nature. People like Charlie are really good people at heart, and they deserve to be treated as equals, not put down; however, in Charlie’s case, this did not occur. Charlie’s co-workers were constantly making fun of him and using him as the butt of their jokes which is downright cruel. The mentally retarded just can’t express themselves the same way, but that means that they should be treated equally, if not with more care. After all, why did Charlie want to experiment with his intelligence? He wanted to be like everyone else and treated equally. To me “Flowers for Algernon” sends a very powerful message about how people’s actions affect a person’s feelings about themselves. Charlie eventually, after undergoing a surgery to increase his intelligence, began to see results in the growth of his brain capacity. Over the course of a few weeks, Charlie’s intelligence tripled growing to an IQ of over 240. Subsequently Charlie realized that being über-intelligent just wasn’t for him. He realized that being someone else was not the solution to his problems; he figured that he just had to grab life by the horns and take what God gave him. This is the part that really absorbed me into “Flowers for Algernon”. I was in awe with Charlie’s decision that being himself was more important than being intelligent. He realized that intelligence doesn’t equal happiness.
In conclusion, “Flowers for Algernon” was a heartrending tale that really touched me. I became in touch with another perspective of the world which was very interesting. I consider Charlie Gordon to be an inspiration to anyone who is not happy with themselves. I think Charlie teaches us all a valuable lesson about how to handle ourselves when we are feeling down. We should not resort to artificial results, we should just live our lives.
December 14, 2008 @ 10:58 pmSorry for the second post:
I agree with SW that being exposed to different types of people gives us a better understanding of where they come from and how they live their lives. Rather than putting someone else down or excluding them because of their differences, we should learn to accept them for what they are. SW gives a personal account of something equivalent to that of “Flowers for Algernon” which I found very interesting. To have experienced something as touching as a personal account, I bet this person is very accustomed to accepting people. SW, I found your account to be very interesting.
December 14, 2008 @ 11:12 pmSince starting the short story unit, each of the stories has had an important effect on me. However the greatest impact that was made was when we read, “Flowers for Algernon”. I chose this story because it had a very strong and meaningful theme. Charlie Gordon is a mentally retarded, thirty-seven-year-old man, who is chosen by a team of scientists to undergo an experimental operation. This operation is designed to triple his intelligence so he can be like everyone else. However, following his operation, he surpasses everybody intellectually, and cannot communicate with anyone. He later reverts back to his usual ways. This passage made me realize that all people have feelings even if they have disabilities. Once you read this story, it makes you think twice when you’re going to call your friend a retard or a moron. You might just be being facetious, but keep in mind that this is someone’s level of intelligence.
December 14, 2008 @ 11:27 pmI agree SW Period 2, because this story has changed the way I looked at a disabled person. I also agree with JL Period 3, because Charlie being himself was more important than being intelligent.
Out of the short stories we read that “Flowers For Algernon” had the biggest impact on me. This story’s message is that mentally challenged people have feelings too is a very important lesson that I think that many people haven’t learned. This story I think really showed how Charlie was hurt by his co-worker’s pranks. However I thought it was interesting that their jokes didn’t really bother Charlie until he did get smarter. This shows that taking advantage of the less gifted is not right and it can still hurt the person’s feelings. The scene where Charlie sees the little mentally disabled boy drop the dishes and he laughs along with the other people I found very disturbing because I have seen kids laugh at kids both retarded and just because they thought they were so much above them. Luckily, throughout the story Charlie had a friend who helped him learn, and gave him someone he could really trust. I think that Ms. Kinnian’s role in this short story was really important to Charlie’s life. I think it was really important because she gave him comfort and she gave him love. She loved him because she realized that he just wanted to get smarter, and was a genuinely good person. She realized that Charlie lived to make others happy and he was a very determined person
December 14, 2008 @ 11:29 pmThis story really made me feel bad for a certain kid in our grade, Antonio Delgado. I felt bad for him because I began to realize how much people make fun of him. I was kind of disgusted by some of the mean spirited things said behind his back. This story also showed me that people who are mentally challenged can be very good people despite their hostile moments. Now, everyday in homeroom I talk to Antonio and he has become a good friend of mine. We talk about the school, his family, and wrestling which he is really into. I also think Antonio enjoys having me as a friend in the school. That is the main reason I feel this story impacted my life; I owe a friend, and a chance to make a difference in someone’s life to the short story “Flowers for Algernon”.
I think that my experience with befriending Antonio has really taught me that mentally challenged people do have feelings because tells me stories of how kids ridiculed him. I think SW’s experience with his babysitter’ sister JJ was probably enlightening in the same way. I think that if everyone got the privilege of having and experience where they got a new respect for someone than the world would be a much better place. I also thought it was interesting that in SW’s response he mentions that his parents were hesitant to expose their children to a mentally challenged person. This shows that people can hold prejudices against these handicapped people. SW’s parents were probably afraid that JJ would be aggressive and hostile like many mentally handicapped people. This is similar to Dr. Nemur’s qualms about Charlie’s temperament, and using him for the experiment.
Though we have read many great stories for this unit; the one with the greatest impact on me because of its theme was “Flowers for Algernon”. Daniel Keyes’ use of artificial mental retardation was key to portray the life timeline of thirty-seven year old Charlie Gordon and how he went from and intelligence quotient of sixty-eight and went above and beyond their expectations and surpassed the intelligence of the doctors. The theme, however, was the most important part of the story. The theme to me was how blind equality is when humanity can’t recongnize the feelings of those who have metal disabilities. In “Flowers for Algernon” this theme really stuck out to me because of how Charlie said that we would not make fun of those who have physical diabilites(handicapped, blind, deaf, etc.) but you will not think twice when making fun of those with mental disabilities. This stuck out to me because Charlie failed to realize that all along while he was mentally retarded and while he was not as smart as others they used him as the center of their jokes. Though, when his intelligence was increased he knew exactly what was going on and he knew that people aren’t just making fun of him but of others who are like him and so he said this questioning how equal we truly are. Another theme is that you should look before you leap. Charlie may have been mentally retarded but he should have known to go further in or Ms. Kinnian should have helped him with that to see the outcomes and the final results. The last theme is probably the most important and that is to just be happy with who you are. Though, Charlie may have wanted to be smart there is somethings that people in general not just Charlie aren’t capable of; so if he was happy with who he was and heis co-workers treated huim equally then he would be much happier and wouldn’t worry about increased intelligence. A leopard can’t change its spots so don’t change what makes you who you are. That is a key component that made up “flowers for Algernon”.
December 14, 2008 @ 11:48 pmThough we have read many great stories for this unit; the one with the greatest impact on me because of its theme was “Flowers for Algernon”. Daniel Keyes’ use of artificial mental retardation was key to portray the life timeline of thirty-seven year old Charlie Gordon and how he went from and intelligence quotient of sixty-eight and went above and beyond their expectations and surpassed the intelligence of the doctors. The theme, however, was the most important part of the story. The theme to me was how blind equality is when humanity can’t recongnize the feelings of those who have metal disabilities. In “Flowers for Algernon” this theme really stuck out to me because of how Charlie said that we would not make fun of those who have physical diabilites(handicapped, blind, deaf, etc.) but you will not think twice when making fun of those with mental disabilities. This stuck out to me because Charlie failed to realize that all along while he was mentally retarded and while he was not as smart as others they used him as the center of their jokes. Though, when his intelligence was increased he knew exactly what was going on and he knew that people aren’t just making fun of him but of others who are like him and so he said this questioning how equal we truly are. Another theme is that you should look before you leap. Charlie may have been mentally retarded but he should have known to go further in or Ms. Kinnian should have helped him with that to see the outcomes and the final results. The last theme is probably the most important and that is to just be happy with who you are. Though, Charlie may have wanted to be smart there is somethings that people in general not just Charlie aren’t capable of; so if he was happy with who he was and heis co-workers treated huim equally then he would be much happier and wouldn’t worry about increased intelligence. A leopard can’t change its spots so don’t change what makes you who you are. That is a key component that made up “Flowers for Algernon”.
December 14, 2008 @ 11:49 pmThe selection that had the greatest impression on me was “Flowers for Algernon”. “Flowers for Algernon” is a touching story about a mentally retarded man who yearns to better himself and become smarter. When his adult night school teacher recommends him for an experiment that will increase his intelligence by 300%, he is eager to participate even though he knows it may not be permanent. As he begins to undergo the experiment his IQ increases and he eventually becomes a genius; so much of a genius that he can no longer communicate with normal humans. This was not a good sign. His intelligence then began to decrease and eventually he became a normal human again. While he declined, the lab mouse that also underwent the experiment eventually died from the decrease in intelligence. This was not good. Charlie, the man, then left Boston because of everyone feeling bad for him from the experiment. This is only one part of the plot.
This story had a great impression on me because of the way Charlie saw life. All Charlie wanted was for everyone to accept him for who he is and to be seen as an equal. Unfortunately he was not seen this way because of his mental disability. The theme of this story had the greatest effect on me. The theme was how all people have feelings, no matter what their non- or disability. This effected me because many times the youth of today, including myself, have used the word “retard” to refer to someone who clearly is not mentally retarded but has only made a mistake or misunderstood something, therefore if we refer to a legit mental retard we do not take it as being offensive when they personally do. The story has also shown me how intelligence is also not a key to happiness and sometimes you are better off being who you are and not trying to be something you’re not. I believe that if more people today believed that the world would be a better place, as we would not have so many people vying to be like someone else. Finally, another thing that affected me in this story was the point of view. By making the story in first person point of view it showed the reader a better understanding of the feelings Charlie had during the experiment. If written any other way, I do not believe that the story would have had the same effect.
I personally agree with JF’s comment on our classmate, A.D. I too have heard very mean comments said behind his back and now see a relation between “Flowers for Algernon” and my personal life. From the story, I have decided to now stand up for that particular student when I hear a comment made.
December 15, 2008 @ 12:22 amAfter reading all of the short stories, “Flowers for Algernon” had the most impact on me for many reasons. The reason why this story has the most meaning to me is because it is about a mentally retarded man and how he gets through life. Because the setting took place in a medical laboratory, it really made me think if this procedure is possible or not. Since Charlie is disabled I felt bad that his two “best friends” made fun of him even though he didn’t have any control over his mental state. Another reason why this story had a lot of meaning to me was because of the plot; the plot of this story was about how determined Charlie is to get this procedure done to realize what it is like to be just like everyone else. The fact that Charlie went though with the operation made him realize a lot more and finally interpret what everyone thought about him. Unfortunately he was not able to keep his intelligence, so he had to do what was best, and move away from everyone he thought he could trust. When reading this story I realized that Charlie was a regular person with a heart. From reading this story, I saw that this would have the most emotional impact on me.
December 15, 2008 @ 12:26 amWhile reading the previous blog responses, I agree with IA. I agree with IA when he said that Charlie didn’t know that he was being picked on until his I.Q. was boosted. When his I.Q. was boosted, even though he realized that people he knew made fun of him he had to accept the fact that they were, and deal with it somehow. It took him awhile but he was soon able to cope with the changes.
The story that I thought had the biggest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon.” In this story, the character who had the most impact on me is Charlie. Charlie was the one who was always picked on by his co-workers because it was mentally retarded. They were treating him different because of his disability. This is a very cruel thing because many people still do that to disabled people today. In fact, in our own society there are tons of people who mimic the characters in the story named Frank and Joe. They are the ones who make Charlie the end of all their jokes. In the story Charlie goes from being a “idiot” to a genius and back to being not the brightest person in the world. This is something that I would have never been able to do. It just so happens that it makes you realize that those bullies are surrounding you and I every day. One thing that everyone should realize is that mentally retarded people are human beings just like the person who making fun of them. This story had the biggest impact on me because it really brings to my attention how sometimes someone is a bully and not even knowing it; or when you are the victim and might not even realize it. This is needless to say that “Flowers for Algernon” is a story that I will never forget about.
I am going to agree with DG because what Charlie went through was very difficult to do. He was not able to communicate with the doctors who operated on him, the night class teacher, who taught him. He was only able to talk to himself. This is something he didn’t even do that often, most of the time Charlie would write in his journal.
December 15, 2008 @ 1:59 pmOut of all the short stories that we read in class I think that “The Kitten” had the biggest affect to me. The young kitten was just trying to be himself and he gets killed! Personally, I think I have learned one of the biggest life lessons, To treat your life and other’s lives with respect even if the life is an animal. Every living thing deserves to live their lives the way they want and shouldn’t be killed for being themselves. Humans, animals, and even plants should be treated fairly. You only have one life and it isnt as long as people hope it could be, so live it out the best way you can, and wisely.
December 15, 2008 @ 2:00 pmI agree with CD of period 1 that every person should be treated the same, even if we are all different in our own ways. People should treat others the way they would want to be treated. No matter how high or low their IQ level, everyone is equal and should be treated the same way.
Over the past few months, we have read several short stories. “Charles” by Shirley Jackson, “Raymond’s Run” by Toni Cade Bambara, “The Kitten” by Richard Wright, “The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe, “Thank you, M’am” by Langston Hughes, and “Flowers for Algernon” by Daniel Keyes each had an impact on me. However, if I had to pick one piece that truly left an impression with me, it would have to be “Flowers for Algernon.” “Flowers for Algernon” follows the story of Charlie Gordon, a thirty-seven mentally retarded man. As soon as I started reading the story, I was immediately interested. Charlie is incredibly kind, even though he suffers through terrible mistreatment because of his disability. The other main characters in this story, Miss Kinnian, Drs. Nemur and Straus, Joe Carp, and Frank Reilly also interested me. Miss Kinnian was quite kind to Charlie, and she believed in him, like no others did. Both of the Drs. at first appear to be caring, but as Charlie become more intelligent, he realizes they do not care for him. Both Joe Carp and Frank Reilly at first seemed to be Charlie’s friends. But Charlie realizes that he is just being used by them. This brings me to another point that was very good in “Flowers for Algernon.”
December 15, 2008 @ 4:48 pmThe plot of this short story was very interesting. Its almost as if two different characters narrate the story. The slow Charlie and the hyper-intelligent Charlie are complete opposites. Charlie originally thinks all people are good, and that all of them care for him. As he becomes more intelligent, his faith in humanity diminishes. His perception of almost everyone changes. This brings me to my final point. The theme of “Flowers for Algernon” impacted on me in a way that none of the other stories did. Charlie never had confidence in himself. Whenever he took a test, he always thought he failed it (the ink blot test.) However, he keeps persisting. All his life, he has faced many challenges. He is constantly made fun of and taken advantage of. But Charlie keeps going. As he grows more intelligent, he is still, if not more, ridiculed. A petition is signed to get him out of his job. The main reason Charlie wanted to become more intelligent was so he could be normal. And then, when he became intelligent, he was too smart. Too dumb, too smart, Charlie is never excepted. This struck me. Almost everyone calls their friends retards, in an affectionate way. After reading this story, I couldn’t help but object to this. Every person deserved respect and understanding, which “Flowers for Algernon” shows on every page.
I agree with CF that all people have feelings, no matter if they have disabilities. CF said that you could tell what went through Charlie’s head, which was also true. In addition, I agree with TP. He says that even if we are teased by our friends, we know they care about us; Charlie didn’t know this. He had to deal with so much, his intelligence being lost, as well as losing his “friends.” Finally, I agree with DG. DG said that he would not have been able to deal with
The story that had the most impact on me was “The Kitten”. This story was about a young boy who killed a kitten out of resentment towards his father. This boy’s name was Richard and he was tired of being reprimanded by his father. Richard never received any love from his dad, and that resulted in the kitten being hung. His father had commanded him to silence the kitten, and instead of chasing it off, Richard killed it. This made his father extremely angry, but he couldn’t do anything about it because he had told Richard to silence the kitten. Since he didn’t specify, Richard knew he could get away with killing the kitten and therefore defy his father. “The Kitten” was a very moving story because Richard’s mother then had to teach him to respect life. Also, it makes you realize how precious and fleeting life is, and teaches you to treat every living thing with kindness.
I agree with EM on the fact that it is surprising that a six-year old could form a plan to take a life. I have loved animals since I was very young, so I could not imagine killing any living creature.
December 15, 2008 @ 5:04 pmThe story “The Kitten” had the biggest impact on me. This was due to the main character. It is hard to imagine that a young boy would actually go to such a limit just to try to get his father in a position where he didn’t have any authority. It is upsetting to know that the boy had such resentment toward his father that he, without blinking an eye, killed another being. The story was very descriptive because it had happened to the author. This story also made an impression on me because the author had carried it with him through his whole life and even devoted a chapter of his book to this incident. Reading this story made me realize what effects your parents could have on you. The boy’s father was an unsupportive coward and at such a young age, I am positive that that would be extremely hard to deal with. The father chose the wrong use of words and his son was smart enough to try and take advantage of that. The boy wanted so badly to humiliate his father and to put him in a place where he had nothing to say.
December 15, 2008 @ 5:17 pmI agree with EM in that the boy was so fed up inside that he didn’t even think twice about what he was doing. The boy witnessed the poor animal suffer and die and didn’t even flinch. He was so focused on getting back at his father that it was not until afterwards that he realized, when he held the lifeless kitten in his hands, what he had done. This incident could have been prevented if the boy had a stronger and healthier relationship with his father. I thought a lot about this story after I read it and it has definitely had a strong impact on me. I truly realized the importance of supportive parents especially in a young child.
When choosing a short story that made the most impact on me, I would have to say that it would be “Flowers for Algernon”. I chose this story because of the theme and the characters. The main character is Charlie Gordon, a thirty-seven year old man who is mentally retarded. Through out the beginning of the story Charlie strives to be smart just like everyone else. Finally he is given the opportunity to undergo an experiment that will make him extremely smart. After the experiment Charlie becomes very smart and realizes that not everyone around him is perfect. He also realizes that the people he thought were his friends were really using him to make fun of. Soon, Charlie becomes so smart that he can’t even communicate with people, not even the doctors were able to communicate with him. As time passed by, his intelligence faded away and he eventually went back to his normal IQ of 68. The people that once were mean to him felt bad and realized that making fun of him was wrong. Even though Charlie was not as smart as the people around him he was still a very capable and kind man. This story really touched me and many other classmates. The theme of this story is that you cannot judge people by there intelligence, rather there personality.
December 15, 2008 @ 5:40 pmThis year in communication arts, we have read many excellent short stories, but the short story that influenced me the most was “Thank You, M’am”. “Thank You, M’am” was a story by Langston Hughes that showed the importance of forgiveness and understanding. The story started in Harlem, New York, at midnight. A boy was walking down the street and tried to steal a woman’s pocketbook. When he got the pocketbook, the woman kicked him and dragged him to her house. At her house, the woman, Mrs. Jones, found out that Rodger, the boy who tried to steal the purse, just wanted money for some blue suede shoes. After finding this out, she gave Rodger ten dollars, so he would learn to do the right thing later on in life. Before she let Rodger leave, she made Rodger wash his dirty face and she also made him eat. When Rodger left, he could only get the words, “Thank you, m’am” out of his mouth, even though he wanted to say more. “Thank You, M’am” has touched me more than the other stories because of its theme. The theme was that one person’s kindness can change another person’s life. Mrs. Jones act of kindness will stay with Rodger his whole life, and it will influence the choices he makes later on in life.
I agree somewhat with what the people who wrote about “Flowers for Algernon” said. Although I agree completely with the theme that mentally retarded people have feelings too, and should be treated like normally people, I feel that the theme of “Thank You, M’am” is stronger. Since we live the middle class suburbs of Florham Park, not most people know about all of the hungry, poor, and homeless people living in cities. Because of this many people don’t realize what a person like Mrs. Jones means to a poor young boy struggling for his next meal. What Mrs. Jones did to help out a less fortunate person was huge factor in Rodger’s life. Mrs. Jones gave Rodger more than ten dollars; she gave him a life lesson.
December 15, 2008 @ 5:50 pmOf all the stories covered in our class’s short story unit, “Flowers for Algernon” was the one that impacted me the greatest. This story was about Charlie Gordon, a mentally retarded man who lives life to the fullest, seeing every glass half full. He, like any other, wants to be accepted and is determined to become smarter. Because of this, he is teased by his “friends”, who really make fun of him, and the other workers at the factory where he works. Charlie’s determination allows him to participate in a scientific experiment in which his intelligence is boosted by three times, making it well over three hundred. As his intelligence increases, Charlie sees life in a different light, realizing that his “friends” were really bullies, that he’s in love with Miss Kinnian, and that the two doctors in charge of the experiment aren’t as smart as he thought they were. Charlie is finally able to be who he would normally never be able to be. When Charlie’s intelligence is at its peak, however, he becomes unable to communicate to normal people because of his super-intelligence and views life less optimistically. As Charlie’s rapid brain development begins to deteriorate, the reader can see him trying to keep hold of his quickly fading intelligence and can’t help but wonder if the experiment was worth it.
What gave me an impact was Charlie’s point of view. Throughout the story, we can see Charlie’s attitude towards everything change as his intelligence is boosted by scientific means. In the beginning of the story, Charlie is perceived by the reader with the personality of a young child. He is optimistic, motivated, and determined to be the best he can be. When his intelligence is beginning to increase, he becomes like a “normal human being”. He can communicate with everyone he knows and is seen as an equal by them. Then when Charlie becomes super-intelligent, he devotes himself to scientific research, becoming aloof from the outside world. As his intelligence deteriorates, the reader can see Charlie become his old self again, the way he was in the beginning of the story. Even though Charlie’s personality changes, he once again becomes a willing, eager person, wanting to make friends and please everyone. This shows that no matter what level of intelligence a person has, it’s the inside that counts, and everyone should be treated equally.
I agree with TP-Period 2 that every person should be treated respectfully, even with differences. Charlie is a kind person who deserves respect as much as anyone else does.
December 15, 2008 @ 5:59 pmThroughout this year, we have read a variety of selections. In my opinion, the short story which was the most touching was “Flowers for Algernon.” In this selection, you are able to see in the point of view of a mentally retarded man, Charlie Gordon. Charlie Gordon was selected to participate in a surgery to increase his IQ. In the beginning of the story, it is clearly seen that Charlie is a kind, caring man. Charlie puts a lot of effort into becoming smart and learning. Charlie is picked on at work by his so called “friends”, Frank and Joe. They pulled pranks on Charlie and only wanted him around to make a mockery of him. After the surgery, Charlie’s intelligence becomes so high that he reaches a point where he is unable to communicate with others. There were both pros and cons to the surgery. After the surgery, Charlie added to scientific discoveries and knowledge. On the other hand, at both points (before and after the surgery), Charlie feels isolated. One day, Charlie was at the diner. He sees a little boy who is mentally retarded whom dropped plates, looking very confused not knowing what to do. Everyone, including Charlie, laughed at the little boy. Charlie then realized how cruel his acts were. How could he laugh at this poor, innocent little boy? He had once been the same as the little boy, unknowing, confused, and a clown. Charlie then defended and stood up for the boy. At the very end of the story, Charlie’s intelligence deteriorates and Algernon, the mouse that the experiment had been tested on, died. Charlie decided to leave town, feeling very ashamed and embarrassed. He leaves Miss Kinnian, his teacher at the adult-night school, the doctors who performed the surgery, Dr. Nemur and Dr. Strauss, and the men at his work, Frank and Joe. As well, Charlie left behind a letter. His last request is for the reader of his manuscript to leave fresh flowers on Algernon’s grave. In conclusion, I believe this story was the most touching, thought-provoking, and had the greatest impact. The morals are that no one should be made fun of due to there disabilities. Although Charlie wasn’t able to read and write well, he was a kind-hearted man. Just because he was mentally retarded, this didn’t give Joe and Frank the rights to make fun of him and pull pranks on him. This story allows the readers to see through the eyes of someone who has experienced such ridicule and mocking. Charlie’s two distinct perspectives allowed him to figure out that he is as human as anyone else, no matter how much intelligence he possessed.
December 15, 2008 @ 6:10 pmI agree completely with TP and JL. Charlie must have gone through a lot of anguish, being picked on every day due to his level of intelligence. Every human should be treated with respect. I couldn’t imagine being Charlie and having to go through such an experience whereas to put a lot of effort into becoming smart and gaining nothing in return. He went through the surgery since Ms. Kinnian thought he deserved this for someone who “gave so much with so little in return.” Unfortunately, the effects were temporary and Charlie returned to his normal, mentally retarded state.
Of all the short stories we have read, Flowers for Algernon had the greatest impact on me. Since Charlie was mentally retarded, it made me feel sympathy towards him. This story got most of its power by it being written through Charlie’s progress reports. Also, when Frank and Joe would tease Charlie, it made you wonder why anyone would ever do that, even though it is happening everywhere around us. The love interest between Miss. Kinnian and Charlie was touching. At first Miss. Kinnian would treat Charlie as one of her students. Later on, as Charlie grew smarter, they fell in love with each other. When Charlie went to night school even though that wasn’t his class made me depressed. Miss. Kinnian ran out crying, and I would too. At this point I feel bad for Charlie since he lost his intelligence, but he doesn’t want anyone to feel bad for him. At the very end of the story, Charlie asks people to put flowers on Algernon’s bed. This part of the story had the greatest impact on me. Charlie is moving away because he doesn’t want anyone to feel bad for him. Yet on top of that, he wants to make sure there are flowers on top of his best friend’s grave. This story teaches you a great deal about friendship, and it also makes you wonder what you would feel like if you were Charlie. I agree with JF period 1 because even though Charlie was mentally disabled, that didn’t stop him from being a good person. Charlie is a very kind, and caring man who we can all learn a lot from. When Charlie found out that Frank and Joe weren’t really his friends, he continued to be nice to them. Charlie had a great heart.
December 15, 2008 @ 6:17 pmI think, unlike everyone else, the best story we read was “The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe. I liked the plot, setting, and mood; but most of all, I liked the character. The plot is, the narrator is the caretaker for an old man who has an cataract. This “evil eye” as he calls it drives the narrator insane. He decides to murder the old man, and could’ve gotten away with it if he hadn’t confessed out of guilt. The setting helps carry the mood. the setting is a creepy, old house at night; So, the mood is obviously dark and gloomy. I like how Poe started the story. It started out with the narrator denying his insanity. Then he starts telling the story like a flash back. The narrator is a mentally insane man who tried to get away with murder. He kills the old man by smothering him with his blanket. Then, he dismembered him in the bathtub so there would be no bloodstains. Finally, he hid the old man under the floor boards of the house. The ending is my favorite part of the story. Two police officers came to the house, because a neighbour heard the old man screaming. The narrator convinced the officers it wasn’t him and they believed him. After that, the police officers stayed in the house and talked. The narrator thought they were mocking him; he started getting angrier and more guilty. Then, he thought started to hear the old man’s heatr beating. After a while, he couldn’t stand it anymore and confessed the crime out of guilt.
December 15, 2008 @ 6:25 pmI agree with AC, NC, and JM. This story really made a huge impact on me. When the boy’s mother made him go outside during the night to make him pray that God didn’t take his soul away while he was sleeping really drilled the lesson into the boy and myself. Also, I agree that this entire situation could have been prevented if the boy’s father actually tried to persue a healthy relationship with him. The resentment is so strong, it really makes me happy that I have a strong relationship with my parents. The events in this story are truly horrific, but I am glad that I read it. It really taught me about life.
December 15, 2008 @ 6:50 pmOut of all of the exhilarating short stories we’ve read in class, I believe that “Flowers for Algernon” had the greatest impact on me. Generally speaking, I think that anyone that reads this story would be affected in some way, shape, or form. To give you a brief overview of the plot, Charlie Gordon is a grown man with an IQ of 68. He goes to night school where he is taught by a young woman, Miss Kinnian. Miss Kinnian recommends Charlie for a surgery that will be done by two neuro surgeons, Dr. Strauss and Dr. Nemur. Before the surgery Charlie has to go through several tests against a small lab mouse named Algernon who has gone through the surgery already to see if he is fit to be the candidate for the surgery. Soon enough, Charlie is selected to be operated on. Through the course of Charlie’s intellect growing he bec omes so smart that he can’t communicate with human beings to the point where they would understand what he is saying. At the height of his intelligence, Algernon dies. So, out of curiosity to why this happened Charlie begins a project to see what was going20on inside Algernon. Sadly, Algernon died because of deterioration in his brain. Not long after that, Charlie’s brightness begins to slowly fade away. You see, it is the symbolism of Algernon’s death that Charlie’s intelligence will go away. Now I would like to reflect on a certain example from the story. While Charlie was smart he went to a restaurant and during the time of his meal a bus boy had dropped plates and they crashed to the floor like Charlie’s self respect soon did after. This bus boy was mentally challenged like Charlie was, and even though Charlie didn’t even realize it, he had been laughing when the boy dropped the plates. Soon after, he stood up for the boy saying it was not his fault and that he couldn’t help it. So, I guess what I’m trying to say is, nobody is perfect. People have flaws and imperfections. So yeah, somebody may not be as smart as you that doesn’t mean they are anything less then you. They have feelings and emotions and a heart too. Charlie was made fun of and picked on because of his “imperfection”. People wou ld say, “You just pulled a Charlie Gordon!” when somebody would do something stupid or make a mistake. Nobody deserved that. Luckily Charlie didn’t understand why they said it at first. Everyone deserves a fair chance at life and someone deprived of that because of something that they were born wi th and physically they can’t help it is just not right. So, yes, I agree with LC, there is always something special about everyone, and no one can ever change that about you.
December 15, 2008 @ 7:06 pmI have read many short stories this year written by very notable authors. All of the stories are very well written, but I think that the story that had the most impact on me was “The Kitten”. This was probably because of the selection’s plot of a poor kitten dying with no plausible reason. This story really makes me think about life and how valuable it it. It also makes me think of how strong an effect somebody can have on someone else, especially if you care about the person. I was also in awe and extremely impressed at how a little boy could do such a thing at such a young age. Richard Wright had murdered the kitten in his story, the reason being that he wanted his father to regret telling him to do so. In the end, Richard was the one that regretted killing the kitten more than anyone else after his mother set him straight by making him burry the kitten and praying. I believe that even though Richard’s father did treat him wrong, he still shouldn’t have stepped to a level so low as to kill an innocent, stray kitten.
I agree with EC’s post about “The Kitten” strongly. I, too, am surprised that Richard killed the kitten by taking his father’s words literally, knowing that his father only meant to quiet the kitten. The theme is very important to the story too, along with the plot. Also, I understand how this person feels about how lucky we are to be able to have the opportunity to read the story in class.
December 15, 2008 @ 7:23 pmThe short story that impacted me the most was “Flowers for Algernon”. The main character, Charlie Gordon, is a kind thirty-seven year old man living a mentally retarded life who willingly undergoes experimental surgery on his brain to boost his IQ level of sixty-eight and, in turn, increase his intelligence. Even though Charlie has an IQ level of sixty-eight he isn’t aggressive, he is kind, sweet, and caring towards others. The theme of this story, being intelligent doesn’t mean being happy, is what impacted me the most. As Charlie grew more and more intelligent, he experienced greater anguish then being retarded. An example of this is when Charlie finally figures out Joe and Frank, his factory “friends”, aren’t really his true friends. Before the operation, Joe and Frank teased and made fun of Charlie constantly, but now that Charlie had the surgery and has a sense of his friend’s actions, he realizes they were laughing at him, not with him. Not only does this example cause pain to Charlie, but the cycle of the experiment caused great suffering to Charlie, too. The fact that Charlie went from being retarded to having super intelligence and then back to being retarded again was not only confusing for Charlie but made him upset. The upsetting part about this was that no matter which way Charlie was, retarded or intelligent, no one could formally understand him. Also, after Charlie undergoes surgery he realizes how much he loves Miss Kinnian, his school teacher. However, this caused him unhappiness as well because he believes Miss Kinnian will never love him back. During the process in which Charlie goes from being intelligent and reverting back to being retarded, Charlie wishes not to see Miss Kinnian. Also, every time she drops by Charlie’s house he tells her to leave because he doesn’t want her to feel bad for him and he is embarrassed of being retarded again.
I agree with MS Period 2 that Charlie should’ve cherished his moments while being intelligent because he went right back to being retarded with no memory of what the experiment was and how he changed. I also agree with TP Period 2 and DG Period 1 that Charlie wants to be treated like everyone else not just a mentally retarded man. He doesn’t need special treatment and he especially doesn’t need to be ridiculed by anyone, including his so called “friends” from the factory. Charlie just wants to be respected and cared for whom he is, not someone he’s not.
December 15, 2008 @ 7:33 pmThe short story that i think impacted me the most must have been “Flowers for Algernon” because this story showed me a true side of people i didn’t usually see. This caring mentally challenged man could go through a surgery and gain extreme intelligence. Then, he could go through the pain of being not able to talk to anyone and be alone. Finally, lose al the intelligence and suffer through the pain of going back. All he wanted to do was be smart and have friends and be good at his job. However, when he was smart he found out the people he thought were his friends really were not. Also he got his job taken away. So i guess you could say the characters mainly impacted me. Especially the kindness of Ms. Kinnian. She really cared about charlie no matter what. I though that was amazing and it was a really beautiful relationship.
I definitely agree with MD in saying that the “Tell Tale Heart was a very interesting story and the setting and the characters went along so well with the whole plot. I thought he response was very well known and i agree with him.
December 15, 2008 @ 8:08 pmThe short story that had the biggest impact was “Flowers for Algernon” because of the main character. Charly played a huge role in this story because the operation was performed on him. Charly has the kind of personality where you can’t stop smiling when he is around you. Charly is mentally-retarded and was an I.Q. of 68 and attends night school. He is the hardest working student and has the biggest heart. Charly was the main reason I liked this story. When Charly’s intelligence level was increasing his loving personality was withering away, but people were starting to take him seriously. I liked Charly when he was fun and loving person and because of his personality “Flower’s For Algernon” was my favorite short story. The title “Flowers for Algernon” is for the mouse, Algernon. Algernon and Charly race, and for a long time Algernon beat Charly. Algernon died during the story and every week Charly went to Algernon’s grave and set flowers on it. From the beginning of the story to the end Charly had three stages. The first stage was what he was always been. The second stage was the peak of his intelligence. He had an I.Q of over 200. The last stage was his lose of intelligence. This was a painful stage to read about because Charly was successful and was very smart and it was slipping through his hands. Flower’s for Algernon” is one of the most inspirational short stories I have read and will stay in my heart until the end of time. This story taught me that no matter who you are or what you have done there is someone that cares about you and will always cheer you on.
December 15, 2008 @ 8:20 pmI agree with SW, JB, and JJ. We have read many great short stories, but the one that impacted me the most was “Flowers for Algernon”. This story was about a thirty-seven year old mentally retarded man named Charlie Gordon. He only had an I.Q of sixty-eight, but he had a huge heart. Charlie works at a factory as a custodian with Joe Carp and Frank Reilly. The sad part of this story is that Charlie thinks they are his friends but really they just use him for their jokes. Charlie really wants to be smart so he goes to night school and takes tours of Boston on Sundays. Since the story is set in Boston there is a lot of places for Charlie to learn about and see. For example, Miss Kinnian, Charlie’s night school teacher, takes him out and asks him questions about the history of the city. Miss Kinnian eventually asks Charlie to participate in a experiment that will make him a genius. Before this happens Charlie has to face Algernon, an intelligent test mouse, in a maze. Algernon beats Charlie in the maze and Dr. Strauss and Dr. Nemur both have doubts. Charlie then races him over and over again, but he can’t win. He gets mad and goes home. Algernon was very important to the plot because in the end Charlie beats Algernon and realizes that the surgery worked. As Charlie gets smarter he realizes that Miss Kinnian and the doctors aren’t geniuses, they are just smart. After becoming extremely smart Charlie turns back to being himself. I love this story because of all its lessons. First, it teaches you that no matter what someone looks like or is they deserve the same amount of respect as everyone else. Second, there will always be someone there for you. Finally, you shouldn’t take what you have for granted. I really enjoyed this story and I learned a lot from it. Did you?
December 15, 2008 @ 9:06 pmOut of all of the short stories that we have read and discussed in class, “The Kitten” has had the greatest impact and made the greatest impression on me. Most students who responded to this blog said that they chose “Flowers for Algernon”, but I disagree. “The Kitten” is about a young boy who lives with his mother, father, and younger brother. His father rarely speaks to his sons, and only does so when they are being scorned. This is because he works the nightshift of his job, and therefore sleeps all day. One day, a kitten is outside of their apartment making noise. The boy’s father, still wanting to sleep, tells the two young children to kill the kitten. When he said this, he only meant for them to quiet it down so he could sleep, but the one boy took this meaning another way. After getting tired of putting up with his father’s cruel punishments and respect, that he did what his father asked for; he killed the kitten. Because he was resentful with his father, the boy hangs the kitten through anger. The boys feels that his plan is ingenious, because he cannot be punished by his father for only fulfilling his father’s orders/wishes. This surprised me that a six-year-old boy could do such a thing as kill an innocent animal. The theme of this story, which was to respect life itself, really taught me to respect all living creatures and even life.
December 15, 2008 @ 10:05 pmThis year, the short stories we have read have all had different themes and meanings. The short story that truly impacted me the most, while I read it, would have to of been “Flowers for Algernon”. This short story was about a thirty-seven year old man, Charlie, who sees our world very differently from our point of view. The reason being, he is mentally retarded with an I.Q. of sixty-eight. Even with his tremendously low I.Q., he remains kind, patient, and unaggressive. This story impacted me the most because of this character, Charlie. Seeing him go through the struggles of not knowing who friends really are, and not knowing what’s happening around him makes it almost difficult to read this selection because you just want to tell Charlie that they are not his friends; but once Charlie finds out that his friends are not actually his friends, from the intelligence he gained from the operation, the theme ignorance is bliss is represented. Charlie felt worse when he knew that his friends were actually making fun of him, then when before his unknowing left him happy. In anyone’s life, not knowing what people may say or do would actually be more beneficial to them then knowing.
In addition, I also agree with I.A.’s response on how Daniel Keyes’s used the theme how blind equality is when humanity can’t recognize the feelings of those who have metal disabilities. When someone would see someone else who is blind, deaf, or handicapped, in most situations, they wouldn’t make fun of them; but when someone has mental problems they have no problem making fun of them. This is very represented in “Flowers for Algernon” when Charlie’s coworkers would make fun of him everyday.
December 16, 2008 @ 12:18 amIn class we have read a number of short stories. The short story that had the greatest impact was “Flowers for Algernon.” “Flowers for Algernon” had a greater impact than the rest of the stories because the main character Charlie only wanted a couple things in life. Those things are were to be smart, to have friends, and not be ostracized by others. Charlie wanted to be smart as everyone else because he was a mentally retarded man who was made fun of by his so called friends. I feel that charlie just wanted to fit in so he decided to go on with the surgery. This short story has tought me that everyone is different and you dont have to change yourself to fit in with others.
December 16, 2008 @ 2:25 amIf I had to choose one story from the short story unit that had the greatest impact on me, I would choose “Charles”. I found this story both entertaining and well thought out. The story is about a young boy, named Laurie, who goes to school for the first time. He is trying to fit in with his classmates, and to be liked. This story made me think about how impressionistic young children are, and just how much they will change themselves to try to fit in with their peers and to be accepted. Children at that age can’t really understand the difference between right and wrong and they will go to behavioral extremes to try to get their classmates to like them.
The reason I found this story to be so amusing was because of the characters in the story. Not only did I love reading about this mysterious “Charles” character, I also liked how the little boy Laurie’s attitude kept changing as the stories went on about Charles. In the beginning he was a sweet, respectful, child, but as Charles becomes more disrespectful in school, Laurie becomes more disrespectful at home. The parents were also fun to read about. They were so astonished that any child could act the way that Charles did, especially at that age. At the end of the story, when they find out that Charles is actually their own, sweet Laurie, the twist is comical. Before Laurie began attending school, he was a lovable child who never disrespected anyone. The child Charles that Laurie describes in class is terrible. When Laurie’s mom goes in for a teacher conference, she is surprised to find out that there is no Charles in class and even more shocked to learn that the class troublemaker is actually her own son.
December 17, 2008 @ 8:27 amThe story that had the greatest impact on me was “Flowers for Algernon”.This story is about a thirty-seven year old, mentally retarded man that is undergoing brain surgery that will hopefully make him smarter. After the surgery, he does become smarter, but not for a very long time.This story showed me that you have to treat people they way you would like to be treated and never to make someone feel bad about them self. Everyone has something unique about themselves and no one should ever try to change that. People always try to fit in with others around them when you can be your self and not someone your not. I also agree with MS when she said being yourself is better than trying to be something your not.
December 17, 2008 @ 9:42 pmAs we know from reading both of these selections, both Harriet Tubman and Ryan White were discriminated against. In Harriet Tubman’s case, African-Americans were discriminated against by the whites, and in Ryan White’s case, he was discriminated against by his whole town. But even when being turned against by their town or even another race, it never stopped either of these inspiring heroes.
February 26, 2009 @ 6:28 pmHarriet Tubman was a woman who had been through a lot in her childhood, but when she heard of being sold further south, she took a chance and escaped, knowing it was one she might one day regret. Harriet Tubman didn’t stop there because after she had escaped and reached the freedom she had longed for since her childhood, she went back to lead more than three hundred other slaves to freedom. Back in the time that Harriet Tubman was alive, she didn’t just face discrimination, but she was treated and thought of as nothing more than a piece of property. Throughout her fight to lead more slaves to freedom she was wanted by many white people and they even offered rewards for anyone who could find her. Still, Harriet never gave up and continued to lead slaves to freedom.
Ryan White was a boy who was born with hemophilia. Throughout his childhood he heard about a fatal disease that had been spreading across the United States. Due to his hemophilia, Ryan had to get injections of Factor VIII to help his blood clot normally. It was made up of thousands of other people’s blood and it was the Factor, the thing that allowed him to live such a normal life, which gave him the AIDS. At thirteen years old Ryan was told he wouldn’t live more than six months, but he continued to fight and lived an astonishing five years. Because so little was known about AIDS during this time, people began to panic. The people in his town ostracized Ryan, and made up nasty rumors about him. They even banned him form attending school. Even when he was being tortured by the people in his community, he not only had the energy to fight his disease but also improve the lives of others living with it. He traveled across the world to speak out about his disease and to teach people how it could and could not be spread.
As you can see, both Harriet and Ryan were amazing people who fought for what was right even when being discriminated against themselves. They both had different challenges, but even when told they could be recaptured or even die, they fought to improve the lives of others.